"I found that i should be in a diet while i went to buy clothes yesterday!"这句话有没有错误啊?

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"I found that i should be in a diet while i went to buy clothes yesterday!"这句话有没有错误啊?
"I found that i should be in a diet while i went to buy clothes yesterday!"这句话有没有错误啊?

"I found that i should be in a diet while i went to buy clothes yesterday!"这句话有没有错误啊?
如果我没有理解错的话,这句话应该是这个意思:当我昨天买衣服的时候,我意识到自己应该节食了
而这里的错误有两处:1 be in a diet 应该是be on a diet 固定搭配
2 while 是接连续性的时间,故应改为when,接时间点

"I"应该大写吧!

should have been

while I was going to...昨天我去买衣服时,发现我应该减肥了

while用于延续性动词,went是短暂性动词,所以要改成when。
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