请高手来帮我改改文章（英文）找语错.Love is always my gift to you.Happy Birthday!In quiet and thoughtful ways...In happy and fun ways...All ways and always---I love you.Nothing can make me change my mind.And I swear it's true cause a

请高手来帮我改改文章（英文）找语错.Love is always my gift to you.Happy Birthday!In quiet and thoughtful ways...In happy and fun ways...All ways and always---I love you.Nothing can make me change my mind.And I swear it's true cause a
请高手来帮我改改文章（英文）找语错.
Love is always my gift to you.Happy Birthday!
In quiet and thoughtful ways...In happy and fun ways...All ways and always---I love you.Nothing can make me change my mind.And I swear it's true cause a girl like you is impossible to find.Just so you know,this feeling has taken control of me and I can't help it.Just as I love you more today than day before.I know as each tomorrow comes I'll love you even more!
Hey girl,ooh you're a stunner.Hot little figure,yes you a winner and I'm so glad that you're mine,You mean everything to me.I don't need money ,I don't deed cars.You are my whole world,and I'm into you with every kiss and every hug,you make me fall in love.
Just accept my love,congratulations and warmest wishes for this day and evey day!I promise you that you will never down.
So everybody,If you see my girl,tell her I miss her smile,tell her i'm counting the minutes gonna see her in a little while.But I know when she holds onto me,she is the one thing that I could never live without……
Just tell her I love her!

请高手来帮我改改文章（英文）找语错.Love is always my gift to you.Happy Birthday!In quiet and thoughtful ways...In happy and fun ways...All ways and always---I love you.Nothing can make me change my mind.And I swear it's true cause a
Love is always my gift to you.Happy Birthday!
In quiet and thoughtful ways...In happy and fun ways...All ways and always---I love you.Nothing can make me change my mind.（And I swear it's true cause a girl like you is impossible to find.） Just as you know,this feeling has controled me and I can't help it.Just as I love you more today than the day before.（I know as each tomorrow comes I'll love you even more!）
Hey girl,ooh you're a stunner.Hot little figure,yes you are a winner and I'm so glad that you're mine,you mean everything to me.I don't need money,I don't deed cars.You are my whole world,and I'm into you with every kiss and hug,you make me fall in love with you.
Just accept my love,congratulations and warmest wishes for today,also every day!I promise you that you will never down.
So everybody,if you see my girl,tell her I miss her smile,tell her I’m counting the minutes（ goanna ）see her in a little while.But I know if she holds onto me,she is the one thing that I could never live without……
Just tell her I love her!
错误的地方都改过来了,其中括号中的是错误的句子,不知你想说什么
还有就是你写完文章后在Word文档里用“拼写与检查”功能检查一下,这样错误会少点.

第二行的in不加，第二节ooh啥意思。第三节的just和evey不加。对了evey是什么东东？下面的so和just不加。so后一句中i'm不加。（对了，这可是人脑看出来的）