看看这篇短文改错I joined in Bird Watching class trip last weekend. I thought it would include a nice place to rest, for I was wrong. The climb burn my legs, and my legs ached. P.E. was easily compared to this. But when we reached on the top,
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看看这篇短文改错I joined in Bird Watching class trip last weekend. I thought it would include a nice place to rest, for I was wrong. The climb burn my legs, and my legs ached. P.E. was easily compared to this. But when we reached on the top,
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I joined in Bird Watching class trip last weekend. I thought it would include a nice place to rest, for I was wrong. The climb burn my legs, and my legs ached. P.E. was easily compared to this. But when we reached on the top, I forgot about all of this. The clouds were so close that it seemed touchable. I had ever seen such a blue sky. Although I had seen many kind of birds before, this was the first time I’d ever realized that birds were beautiful. When it was time to leave, I felt strangely disappointing and realized that I wasn’t ready to go home!
看看这篇短文改错I joined in Bird Watching class trip last weekend. I thought it would include a nice place to rest, for I was wrong. The climb burn my legs, and my legs ached. P.E. was easily compared to this. But when we reached on the top,
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第二行:burn--hurt;easily--easy
第三行:reached on--on去掉;it seemed--they
第四行:ever--never;kind--kinds;this--it
第五行:disappointing--disappointed
I joined Bird Watching class trip last weekend. I thought it would include a nice place to rest, but I was wrong. The climb hurt my legs, and my legs ached. P.E. was easily compared to this. But when ...
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I joined Bird Watching class trip last weekend. I thought it would include a nice place to rest, but I was wrong. The climb hurt my legs, and my legs ached. P.E. was easily compared to this. But when we reached the top, I forgot about all of this. The clouds were so close that they seemed touchable. I had ever seen such a blue sky. Although I had seen many kinds of birds before, this was the first time I’d ever realized that birds were beautiful. When it was time to leave, I felt strangely disappointed and realized that I wasn’t ready to go home!
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I joined in the Bird Watching class trip last weekend.
I thought it would be a good place to rest, but I was wrong. I hurt my legs during climbing and they ached.
P.E. was easily compared to...
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I joined in the Bird Watching class trip last weekend.
I thought it would be a good place to rest, but I was wrong. I hurt my legs during climbing and they ached.
P.E. was easily compared to this.(这句没看明白你要表达啥)
As soon as we reached the top, I forgot about all of this. The clouds were so close as if could be touched. I had never seen such a blue sky. Although I had seen many kinds of birds before, this was the first time I’d ever realized that birds were so beautiful.
When it was time to leave, I felt strangely disappointed and realized that I wasn’t ready to go home!
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第一行in改为the,没空中...........