Today we only have two classes.Many teachers don't have classes.Because of the 5.1 holiday will caming.we came back dormitory after the two classes.we only have three days holidaysThe holiday is too short.we cannot go anywhere.we don't have much mone

Today we only have two classes.Many teachers don't have classes.Because of the 5.1 holiday will caming.we came back dormitory after the two classes.we only have three days holidaysThe holiday is too short.we cannot go anywhere.we don't have much mone
Today we only have two classes.Many teachers don't have classes.Because of the 5.1 holiday will caming.we came back dormitory after the two classes.we only have three days holidays
The holiday is too short.we cannot go anywhere.we don't have much money .So we hardly have any activity.This holiday ,no passion.

Today we only have two classes.Many teachers don't have classes.Because of the 5.1 holiday will caming.we came back dormitory after the two classes.we only have three days holidaysThe holiday is too short.we cannot go anywhere.we don't have much mone
Today we only had two classes. Many teachers didn't have classes because May Day Holiday is coming.We came back to our dormitory after two classes. We will only have a three-day holiday. I think the holiday is so short that we cannot go anywhere. We don't have much money, either. So we can hardly have any fun. This holiday makes us have no passion at all.
最后一句还可写成What a boring holiday it will be!
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Today we have only two classes..Many teachers don't have classes.Because the 5.1 holiday is caming.We will come back to our dormitory after the two classes.We have only three-days holiday.
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Today we have only two classes..Many teachers don't have classes.Because the 5.1 holiday is caming.We will come back to our dormitory after the two classes.We have only three-days holiday.
The holiday is too short that we cannot go anywhere.We don't have much money ,So we hardly have any activitives.This holiday make us have no passion.
改完了，这是改过后的文章。楼上的不全。。。

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because of （of 去掉）因为because of 后面接的是名词性短语而不能接句子。
另，will 后面 caming 改成come。（will 需要与动词原形连用）
came back 后面加 from 表示从哪来
另 最后一句可以改成：perhaps ，we will have a holiday without any passion.